Treatment Evaluation

After presenting our treatment to the class, they were asked to comment on what they thought about our video. The wordle above are all the words that the audience liked about our treatment for our video.

However, we had also had comments on how we could improve our video, the main criticisms was that we were risking being to direct with all the lyrics.

Our group decided that we are not going to have the actions to match all the lyrics all the time during the song, therefore the video won't be too lyrical.

Treatment Presentation

In the post below is our groups treatment presentation. We decided to create both a powerpoint presentation and a word document to hand out to the class. The treatment included every thing that we had on our mind map but in alot more detail. Our presenation was then filmed. I think our treatment went well however when uploading our video the beginning had lines across the screen and after uploading the video onto the Macs my and emilys opening slide was cut off because the tape was not running long enough. However , we uploaded our presentation on to Scribd and Youtube as the rest of the presentation was filmed without any issues.


Our Treatment Media



Emily